diff --git a/en/bitcoin-for-individuals.html b/en/bitcoin-for-individuals.html index d8bb057b..45884671 100644 --- a/en/bitcoin-for-individuals.html +++ b/en/bitcoin-for-individuals.html @@ -17,8 +17,8 @@ title: Bitcoin for Individuals - Bitcoin
Bitcoin transactions are secured by military grade cryptography. Nobody can make a payment on your behalf or charge you money without having a copy of your wallet. So as long as you take required steps to protect your wallet, Bitcoin provides a nice level of protection against many types of fraud.
-You can already send and receive payments for free! Except for special cases like very tiny micro-payments, there is no enforced fee. You can however choose to pay a small voluntary fee to increase your transaction priority and to remunerate people who operate the Bitcoin network.
+Bitcoin allows to send and receive payments for free. Except for special cases like very tiny micro-payments, there is no enforced fee. You can however choose to pay a small voluntary fee to increase your transaction priority and to remunerate people who operate the Bitcoin network.
-Anonymous payments are a part of our everyday lives as most of real life purchases are done without the requirement to provide a proper identification. Bitcoin now introduces the same freedom to the online world. It allows you to buy services or make donations without the hassle of being passed under x-ray. However, you should note that full anonymity requires special efforts.
diff --git a/en/choose-your-wallet.html b/en/choose-your-wallet.html index f8988906..c4898dba 100644 --- a/en/choose-your-wallet.html +++ b/en/choose-your-wallet.html @@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ title: Choose your wallet - BitcoinOnline wallets allow you to use your Bitcoin anywhere with less do to protect them. However, you must choose your online wallet with care as they host your Bitcoins.
+Online wallets allow you to use Bitcoin anywhere with less do to protect your wallet. However, you must choose your online wallet with care as they host your bitcoins.
Bitcoin offre une nouvelle approche avec les paiements. De fait, certains mots nouveaux pourraient entrer dans votre dictionnaire. Ne vous en faites pas, même la radio a un jour créé de nouveaux mots.
+Bitcoin est une nouvelle approche des paiements en ligne. De fait, certains mots nouveaux pourraient entrer dans votre dictionnaire. Ne vous en faites pas, même la radio a un jour créé de nouveaux mots.