From c9599fb20d79db7de8769659bbed37666b431b46 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Matt Corallo <matt@bluematt.me>
Date: Wed, 14 Sep 2011 16:20:37 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Somewhat better (IMHO) first paragraph.

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               <div class="span11 primarybox">
                 <h1>Bitcoin <small>P2P Digital Currency</small></h1>
                 <p>
-                  Bitcoin is new digital currency that enables instant payments to anyone in the world at virtually no
-                    cost.
-                  Bitcoin uses peer-to-peer technology to operate with no central authority. Managing transactions and issuing money are tasks that are carried out <a href="bitcoin.pdf">collectively by the network</a>.
-                  Bitcoin is also the name of the open source software developed in order to use this currency.
+                  Bitcoin is an experimental new digital currency that enables instant payments to anyone, anywhere in the world.
+                  Bitcoin uses peer-to-peer technology to operate with no central authority: managing transactions and issuing money are carried out <a href="bitcoin.pdf">collectively by the network</a>.
+                  Bitcoin is also the name of the open source software which enables the use of this currency.
                 </p>
                 <p>The <a href="https://en.bitcoin.it/wiki/Original_Bitcoin_client">software</a> is a community-driven open source project, released under the <a href="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/MIT/">MIT license</a>.</p>
                 <p>