From c11f93d9908a2cbbdd39e663b853bd971a77f7fb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Saivann <saivann@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 18 Mar 2013 16:08:39 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] few discussed fixes update title in the "enthusiast" page
 remove "democracy" in the first title fix blockchain.info link to the
 extension

---
 en/bitcoin-for-enthusiasts.html | 4 ++--
 en/choose-your-wallet.html      | 4 ++--
 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en/bitcoin-for-enthusiasts.html b/en/bitcoin-for-enthusiasts.html
index ea3a04ce..e788a4c6 100644
--- a/en/bitcoin-for-enthusiasts.html
+++ b/en/bitcoin-for-enthusiasts.html
@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@ layout: base-en
 title: Bitcoin for Enthusiasts
 ---
 <h1>Bitcoin for Enthusiasts</h1>
-<p class="summary">Bitcoin is changing the world of finance, making it more open and democratic.</p>
+<p class="summary">Bitcoin is changing the world of finance, by giving you control over your money.</p>
 
-<h2><img src="/img/ico_democracy.svg" alt="Democracy" />Bitcoin is a worldwide democratic consensus</h2>
+<h2><img src="/img/ico_democracy.svg" alt="Democracy" />Bitcoin is a worldwide consensus</h2>
 <p>By its decentralized open-source nature, Bitcoin is the first payment network that is powered by its users with no central authority. Even Bitcoin developers have no power to force updates in the protocol if enough users, developers, or miners disagree. <i>You</i> have exclusive control over your Bitcoin wallet.</p>
 
 <h2><img src="/img/ico_network.svg" alt="Network" />Digital money made for the Internet</h2>
diff --git a/en/choose-your-wallet.html b/en/choose-your-wallet.html
index cd74e6fa..b15d98f7 100644
--- a/en/choose-your-wallet.html
+++ b/en/choose-your-wallet.html
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ title: Choose your wallet - Bitcoin
 <style xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/html">body{min-width:1200px;}</style>
 
 <h1>Choose your wallet</h1>
-<p>Your Bitcoin wallet is what allows you to transact with the world. It gives you ownership of Bitcoin <i>addresses</i> that you can use to receive coins from other users, and then lets you send those coins onwards. Just like email, you can receive Bitcoins when you are offline and all wallets are compatible with each other.</p>
+<p>Your Bitcoin wallet is what allows you to transact with the world. It gives you ownership of Bitcoin <i>addresses</i> that you can use to receive coins from other users, and then lets you send those coins onwards. Just like email, you can receive Bitcoins when you are offline and all wallets are compatible with each other. Before you start with Bitcoin, be sure to read <a href="/en/you-need-to-know">what you need to know</a>.</p>
 <h2>Get started fast and easy</h2>
 <p>If you are new to Bitcoin, those wallets are a good place to begin.</p>
 <ul class="list">
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ title: Choose your wallet - Bitcoin
     <p>Blockchain is a user-friendly web wallet. It stores an encrypted version of your wallet online but decryption only happens in your browser. For security reasons, you should always use the browser extension and email backups.</p>
     <p><a href="http://blockchain.info/wallet/chrome-extension" target="_blank">Visit website</a></p>
   </span>
-  <a href="https://blockchain.info/wallet/" target="_blank"><img src="/img/clients/lo-blockchain.png" alt="blockchain" /></a>
+  <a href="http://blockchain.info/wallet/chrome-extension" target="_blank"><img src="/img/clients/lo-blockchain.png" alt="blockchain" /></a>
 </span>
 </div>
 </div>